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Her will to move on, slips further away.
The hope of her dreams, fall also astray.
Where is she now?
What will she do?
Left in the dust, so no one would know.

The mice run on the wheel
The cat chases her meal
The dog lays asleep
As the fish did so too
In the silent room, where only they now creep

Darkness dawned, the lights still out
The room still empty, she was out and about
Her computer was off
The phone disconnected
Even her mobile was dead, all around the clock

Time went on, still no one heard
Holding out her arms, as if she were a bird
Up so high
The wind in her face
It was too late now, for those bitter goodbyes

Slipping a note inside a plastic sleeve
Protecting the from when she will bleed
With one deep breath
And a step on the ledge
It was time now, to come to her death

A smile crossing her lips, a tear in her eye
She lent over the edge, her arms out wide
30 stories, 20 stories
10 and 5
Her smile stayed strong, until she hit the ground

Her note soon found, written her goodbyes
I'm sorry, I tried, I couldn't do it, and died
So now I disappear, where I no longer fear
But for once in my life
Although it my last
I finally felt
That I wasn't dying
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Author's Comments

Randomly wrote it, decided to post it. I have no idea what category it's meant to go in since I know nothing about literature lol so pardon if it's wrong.

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Whoa...that is deep.

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i love it and its realy deep

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What is life...we see it only through our eyes and it seem to always be in an inside view meaning that what you see is brought into the part of your mind that comprehends it so you only see as much as you can understand but what I want to get at is the force behind life, the hand that turns time. Time is eternal as we live and die life continues and time still goes on like a current pushing life into the future. Some refuse to continue through life not wanting to meet the future while others rush wanting life to end quickly...this is already too much nice word of lit. very well described
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As long as one is alive, they are connected to a stream of feelings, and the feeling of impending doom is one humanity shares.

don't forget there are other feelings to feel, otherwise you've left yourself open to the steam of feelings and only felt the bad.

spilt milk.

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<3.
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Lovely poem, really. I loved the imagery, the emotions... fabulous!! ^_^

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Hell's not so bad when you get to keep an angel with you
:iconakiko-ai-kureshi:
=3 glad ya think so

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If it wasn't meant to be eaten, it wouldn't have been shaped like a taco!
:iconakiko-ai-kureshi:
^_^ thank you hun~

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Sei - The gayest gay that gayed the gaying gay....since Sailor Uranus.

If it wasn't meant to be eaten, it wouldn't have been shaped like a taco!
:iconakiko-ai-kureshi:
why thank you <3 I'm glad you like it

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Sei - The gayest gay that gayed the gaying gay....since Sailor Uranus.

If it wasn't meant to be eaten, it wouldn't have been shaped like a taco!
:iconakiko-ai-kureshi:
this is true =O

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Sei - The gayest gay that gayed the gaying gay....since Sailor Uranus.

If it wasn't meant to be eaten, it wouldn't have been shaped like a taco!

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